A splash of tears keeps hitting me You are the name of furious passion inside me It hurts me when I see it’s not there. Even I am the colour of gloomy at your night Or maybe tan from your sunburn. I found you’re the name of the path in my little city But I am the dust line on your Fate Or the memory of your last night. You Don’t have any plea to save me from the ocean Or a little desire and courage. But on my end, it is still like the first day, Because your spirit is bland with me for an era. Your love is my wind And your ignorance is power. I understand this is the last lane to walk And I want to live with the memories. I have a weeping to hold But moans I need to bury. My heart exploits tears of blood and drains on. I suffer a burden you left in me. I know it is time to forget But I can’t fight with my wild heart, Don’t know how to live this way. A splash of tears keeps hitting me. Please, be my last breath; blow into me until I close my eyes. I am on the same path and waiting for you to hold me again. If, by chance, you missed me a little Just smash my heart again. Still, you are the sound of my whimper Even I know you are just a shade of my candle. And I want to burn myself with your light. You are the name of my soul which is hiding from the crowd And my darkness of the night. By rinrainbow
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I think people have to take their time to sit and think of your wordings. Such powerful to reach out in to the core. I couldn’t control myself and go though it periodic times and get lost in my thinking world.
It is good to let the emotion out. This is super powerful.
This is so powerful. Just reading it breaks my heart. Absolutely great job.
Wow, I had to read it a few times over. This is great work!
“Your love is my wind and your ignorance is my power”! That spoke big volumes to me.
Such an amazing poem that is very heartfelt through our souls. Everyone must let his/her emotion come out and after that just move forward whatever happens!
This was full of emotion, and I felt every word that I read in this poem
Beautiful words that make up a beautiful poem. Keep it up!
This poem is both beautiful and dark all at once. I love the deep emotions expressed. It feels extremely meaningful.
omg your poem…It brought tears to my eyes, I love it!!! Your words, every single of them, wow!!!
What a powerful poem! Thanks for sharing
wonderful and powerful yet heartbreaking poem. I enjoyed reading it, I almost heard you cry
Beautiful words and a work of heart. Very touching.
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Writing is therapy and your poem was a way to let all those pent up emotions flow. It was such a powerful read.
This is a very touching and lovely poem. Very talented. Thank you for sharing!
Aww, this was such a powerful poem. Had me in tears.
Oh wow such a well-written and emotional poem that is something you need to read over! Great work
Such a lovely poem. I feel the sadness of it but it was beautiful overall. Keep up the good work!
This is such a really great and very powerful poem! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Beautifully written, you could really feel what you felt when writing this. Thanks for sharing this!
Amazing poem, although I’m not a big fan of it. Sometimes I like to read them dn understand them.
Great deal of emotion here. I had to go back and read a second time to absorb everything.
Reading your poem made me feel and connect with all those strong emotions. It is beautifully written, I am glad to have come across your poem.
this is deep! Wow I have felt these emotions before,,
I can related to this, it brought me back to a time… Craving, loving someone who can’t or won’t reciprocate the same affection, that was a moment in my live. Did I regretted it, NO because it was beautiful while is last. Lovely poem
My heart swells with emotion as I read this poem! The poem really speaks to me.
This is so beautiful and amazing work. It just touched me in a way I cant define it
Heart strong puller to be sure. And very well written.
Very beautiful and pwerful! Your words are wonderful!Such a word you used here just mindblowing
Such heartfelt words. I’d love to read more of your poems!! 🙂
What a beautifully written poem and keep up the amazing work.
Such a moving piece. So well written and full of emotion.
WOW! This is beautifully written with heart-felt emotion and description.
These are beautiful words. Keep on writing lovely poems like this.
While poetry isn’t my thing, I can appreciate the language and strong emotions of this poem. You also chose a powerful image.
I agree it is a powerful poem. Actually, I love crying, I love to feel more freedom after tears. Keep writing; you are doing a good job!
Wow, super powerful, thank you so much for sharing!
I’d like to say this is a good poem.
Love this. Read it a few times to let it sink it. I can’t wait to read more
Tears are such a show of emotion. Joy, anger, and sadness can all be expressed via crying. It’s such an interesting thing our bodies do!
An interesting discussion is definitely worth comment. I do think that you need to publish more about this subject matter, it might not be a taboo subject but usually people do not speak about such topics. To the next! Cheers!!
I feel the emotions of this poem! Thanks for sharing this awesome poem
Your writing is so beautiful! So powerful!
This is beautiful. So heartfelt and sad.
Thank you for sharing this amazing poetry.
These are profound words. I wonder if they are a deep place in your soul