Can you please hold me for some time? I know this will not keep going forever, So please stay with me, Before the morning detaches you. I know very well this will not keep going endlessly, Please hold me just one more time. Before the morning, It washed everything. I am just a lonely standing candle, with melted tears who can give a light up for the darkest moment And die silently. I can't imagine tomorrow you are no more with my side. But We have left to share our adoration, Your love is like oxygen for the rest of my life. Please hold me for the last time. my misery makes more sense than I can illuminate, all I can sense just your love now My grief bounces off the hedges. It boom's in my mind and inhabits my chest. It's dense, and it splashes in my lungs. It steals my breath and robs me of my smile. That I certainly not want it to wind up I'm drenching in myself, So please hold me tight with your boundless love. Before, I blunder away from this darkness. BY Rinrainbow ~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beautiful poetry. Love it.
This is beautiful. It really gives me all the feels of that first love. Really great.
This poem was so good. I love the angsty vibe here. It’s kind of all over the place, and that’s exactly the thing that you can sometimes get in a relationship.
This poem is so rich and full of emotion. I really enjoyed reading it.
OH, now I am sad. This is a really lovely poem! So emotional…
Nice, thoughtful poem. Makes me think about my wife and the good times we share.
Oof, this hit hard. I’ve definitely felt these emotions before. Thank you for sharing these beautiful words.
omg this is beautiful!!! I love written words, so good!!! Please keep them coming.
This is so lovely and full of emotion, I loved reading it.
This is so beautiful! You are a talented writer.
Great poem, perfect for those who are so much in love right now.
This is such a beautiful and touching piece. How I wish that I can send this poem to the one that I’m missing very much lately. Been visiting my dreams twice now.
This makes me so emotional. It reminds me of my first love. I miss him so much and we broke up because of jealousy. I still loved him and would go to his office to sneak peak on him. Sadly he has a new girlfriend now. I am so heartbroken
Amazing poem super interesting, inspirational, and uplifting. Thanks for sharing!
I love every lines. You can feel the intensity of the emotions. I love it. Keep it up!
Your poem is beautiful. Very touchy
I love this. Sometimes when people leave or pass, you have that feeling of wishing you could hold them one more time.
Words can say a lot especially when it’s a lovely poem like this 🙂
This poem was beautiful! It made me a bit emotional. Wow!
What a beautiful poem! I really love the tenderness in it!
This was a really moving piece to read. I found myself reading it a few times over!
Tender and loving. Really an emotional, comfort-draping poem.
Beautiful poetry. It’s romantic but it’s also somehow sad like the two people could be separated at any time. Hence, the request to be held.