I close my eyes and take a long deep breath, the blue skies turn to the dark, no more stories to write. my smile conceals my screeches. The tears have wiped, but my eyes are still drizzly, My sting is departed, but the wound is deep to hide, I want to express, but mysteries are to retain, Life is just rotating around mysteries, I wanted to walk with you, and I lost you forever. I couldn’t find you anymore and no one to hold my hand. I can't understand why I'm alive, but I stand again, Like the oceanic. Whose streams, Many times they are behind, But unvaryingly they climb. I can hear a symphony of thunder but I Just making my way, Making away across the troop The blackness surrounds me, Sopping and stony, my vastest terrors, Not by the thunder but by my tears. I’m petrified I sense nothing Will my numbness terrify me evermore? I close my eyes and nothing left to say my love literally harms me so badly inside. I’m standing at the edge of a mountain lets get down from here and finish it forever. But I want to know how life treats me I am not wounded anymore Because I understand the meaning of love means sacrifice. And I sacrificing my dreams for you. By rinrainbow ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Such a beautiful poem, with a very deep emotion running through it. So lovely.
This is such a beautifully written piece of poetry. Ver moving and emotive.
Love is indeed about sacrifice because you will put the other person’s needs and comfort over your own.
That is a very interesting poem. Nice work.
This was so good. I can really feel the turmoil in this one.
This poem is so beautiful, nicely done as usual.
What a very deep poem – saying goodbye to someone you love can be very hard
This is- beautiful poem. I have felt love deeply like this before.
This is such a wonderful poem so so dreamy!!! thank you so for sharing
Very well written. Thanks for sharing with us.
This poem is so well written, I love the language used in it it shows so much emotion.
Poetry can both speak to the heart and speak of the heart. Thank you for this glimpse into yours.
This is such a very emotional and beautiful poem that I read today. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, I like it.
This was such a beautifully written poem!
This is such a great poem! The meaning of love really is quite complex and powerful, isn’t it?
Beautiful poem. Love is one of the most amazing sacrifices.
A touching poem indeed. There’s always a time when we need to sacrifice for the people we love.
This is so so beautiful! I love your poems a lot. Thank you so much for the amazing words.
Reading this makes me really understand and really feel the emotions of the poem. I am sure the other readers would feel the same too.
This is very intimate so thank you for sharing. This poem has such vivid imagery.
Love that does not come with sacrifice is not “love” at all, I think. I don’t mean to say easy love is not real or right, but I’m sure that when you truly love someone, you have to give a little of yourself.
I loved this. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful poem. Very deep and well written.
I hate how true it is. Love really does meaning sacrifice in soo many ways.
Love always incorporates sacrifice in all ways and manners
I love the vivid imagery in this poem.
Very serious yet lovely poem. I love it. I’m a bit emotional reading it.
This is such a beautiful and emotive poem. Love takes a lot, but it is a great feeling!
I felt every word that you had written. Heartfelt emotions!
Yes, I agree, love means sacrifice! Loved reading the poem, so beautiful ❤️
What is a very beautiful poem with such true words. It is has a serious tone but it has important, enduring words!
I love poetry but have no talent writing it myself. I’m in complete awe with your beautiful words. Please keep writing! x