Might be you are still looking out for me,
Battling for our brilliant future
Continue To think that I’m in raindrops.
Strolling on the shimmering street, holding your hands
In your kind gestures and love, bliss, and fulfilment.
Of course, playing the waiting game.
Counting Each and each snapshot of the drawn-out day,
With my incredible longing.
Perusing your sonnets and a few letters
Then, at that point, continue to stand by once more,
To hold your hands once more
In your kind gestures and love.
Got the Calling for an obscure course
Don’t have the foggiest idea about the limit of affection
Where is the finish of the hopelessness?
I found your spot on there
Might be today, I will think that you are in my arm
Yet, would I be able to keep you there tomorrow also?
Assuming that you are sure,
I’m actually that amount a long way from you
With a similar load of affections.
Wow….. It’s a very nice presentation of fell of love and care. A nice piece of interpretation.
A brilliant approach to think of your loved one and feel the blessings of love. A great artifacts of love and emotions. Good job, Tanin!
Amazing words, the meaning behind these words is strong as well.
That is such a beautiful poem. I love the flow and the imagery.
What a beautiful poem! The imagery you used in this piece made it come to life and so vivid, especially the analogy on the raindrops. Another beautiful piece by you!
Such a beautiful piece of art. Love the meaning behind those words.
Such a lovely poem about longing! I can really feel the emotion behind your words.
Hhhaaaaaa….the effect physical touch has on somebody or can have on them is unfathomable! We all need to hold hands more than we’ve been told to.
This is a lovely, well-written poem and touches my heart. Can’t wait to read more.
There is deep thought, love and introspection here. It’s a lovely share
Love the mood of the poem! I feel a sense of longing somehow.
What a beautiful poem. I have really felt this way towards someone in the past and you’re captured that emotion and sense of longing so perfectly.
A true work of heart. Beautiful poem and I enjoyed reading this.
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This is so beautiful and well written. I can feel the love and wanting. Very touching.
This is such a beautiful poem. And I can feel your emotions in it.
I love your poem! I read it many times and I wish I can writing something like this too
An awesome poem that really cut through the heart, it has a very strong will to surpass this condition. As a long-distance relationship is really difficult, both need to be strong and keep the love alive even your not seeing it in person.
That was an interesting poem. Thank you for sharing this.