To my Daddy, “separated by death, together with by love

To my Daddy

 In an enthusiastic memory,

The rain pours even when I dance alone,

By the time this mist clears.

I’ll run with my feet wet,

Daddy, please hold my hand ,

Don’t leave me alone again.…

The moon looks so isolated,

Like it’s weepy in the bright night sky.

Even though I always know the morning will come,

I want to stay in your heart like a lil star.

The day, that moment

If I knew this was gonna happen.

If I knew you won’t be with me anymore,

I would have remembered more of them.

When will it be?

If I see you again

I will look into your eyes And say, “I miss you so much, dad

Behind the faint smile that looked at me

I will draw a beautiful purple shade

We may not be on the same page

But I want to walk this path with you

And want to hold your hand .

My feet are scorching in the roasting rays of my tears,
Demanded to me Daddy, give me your hand
Please give me breath again
Dad, please say something..

Calling out to you…is your adored child,
You have given true meaning to my life.

Daddy, I won’t memorialise you in the stars, because they fade away.

I won’t memorise you with a rhyme, for it will be forgotten one day.

I will just keep you protected in my heart so that you are with me in every way. I miss you.

To my Daddy

46 thoughts on “To my Daddy, “separated by death, together with by love

  1. This poem is just beautiful. I know you must really miss your father. I love the last part, where you keep him by your heart so that he is with you everyday.

  2. This is a very nice poem and I understand how you feel. I lost my father when I was six years old. My daughter lost her father (and I, my husband) when she was 5 years old.

  3. I know how it feels! You have written such a beautiful poem for your father ❤️ Love it!

  4. This is such a lovely poem. My father passed away a few years ago and this really touched my heart.

  5. Awww, I want to hug you. This is a very sedimental and poignant poem about your daddy. It was beautifully written!

  6. This was such a moving poem. Could feel your emotions through the prose. My condolences to you and your family.

  7. This is absolutely one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever read. I know that one day, I”ll have to talk with my father from heart to heart rather than in person.

  8. I’m lucky that my dad is still alive, but my mom passed away a few years ago. Your words have great meaning to anyone who has experienced this type of loss.

  9. This is suche a beautiful share. I’ve read it with so interest, your words are so deep. You know how to touch feelings. – Paolo

  10. I’m emotional reading this. I have a rocky relationship with my dad growing up but we got closer and closer as the time goes by. I can feel the lines of the poem.

  11. This one is hitting a bit close to home as my father died one year ago this month. The poem is quite lovely. Thank you for sharing with us!

  12. This is so precious and those words are just beautiful. Thank you so much for being so open and sharing.

  13. Oh, wow. This one really got me. I’ve always been a daddy’s girl, and I really felt this one. Love it.

  14. I love your poem. I was teary eyed reading this. I can feel your pain, your longing for your father. I lost my father to cancer, 29 years ago. I have been living 29 fatherless years and I miss my dad so much.

  15. This poem is such a touching tribute for dads. It’s beautiful and each line is packed with meaning and emotions.

    1. I still feel the emotions each time I read this piece. As a father, I am deeply touched by your words. It’s timely that we will celebrate Father’s Day soon.

  16. Such a heartfelt poem. I’m sure it was hard to share, but I know a lot of people will be touched by it, especially with father’s day right around the corner.

  17. This was such a moving poem and it definitely brought a tear to my eye. Thank you for sharing it…

  18. Oh, man. Talk about a drop kick in the feels. I love my dad. He’s been my best friend since forever. I can’t imagine losing him.

  19. I really love the way you express your love for your dad in this poem. I can tell you guys had a great bond.

  20. What a beautifully written poem and quite heartbreaking as well. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  21. Indeed a poem full of love. I could only wish, every father in the world could read such beautiful poem.

  22. This is beautiful and sad. Love you how expressed your love for your dad. Thank you for sharing this heartwarming poetry.

  23. I welled up reading this poem. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem truly love the rawness and sincerity of your words.

  24. Even the look of beautiful things, like the moon, can turn when you are sad. This poem evokes very poignant feelings.

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