Walking alone under the harsh sun
I can see your innocent smile.
Mum, your love is my temple;
your face is my prayer.
Mum, without you, life is so rough.
When I close my eyes and see
a striking butterfly
Surround me in my sturdy stage and my gladdest times.
You fly into my imaginings,
and when I am slumbering
You will always be an Angel infinite.
Mum, still, I can feel your
every fragrant breath
and begged that each one
wasn’t your ultimate.
But the time was so cruel with me, Mum.
I wanted you to wake up and
snuggle me for the last time.
But I lost you forever, Mum.
Mum, now you are pain-free
found your place in Heaven
underneath a cherry blossom.
Mum, when I close my eyes,
I can hear your soft echoes.
When I breathe,
I sense you adore me.
Mum, you told me not to be afraid
You always wiped my hushed tears,
Heal my sores, Show me right from wrong.
Mum, can you hold me for a sec?
I want to smell your love again.
I wish you could see me and
reward me for my achievement.
I am here just because of you, Mum.
You are my inspiration and motivation.
I can’t see you anymore, but I can feel you with me always.
Mum, I miss you so much now as I missed you then.
Always and forever
Mum, remember I am still waiting for you.
My last desire If I could see you just one more time.
Do you know mom what I would do?
Release all my gloom and say, Mum, I love you so much.
By rinrainbow
49 thoughts on “Walking alone under the harsh sun”
This is really sad.. i am also sorry to hear about your mom and here’s a virtual hug for you ♥
Have you heard of the song “Holes in the Floor of Heaven” by Steve Wariner? That’s always my comfort song whenever i misses my grandma and my dad.. you should try listening to it too.. it could help ease the burden
What a lovely and poignant poem for your mom. I can totally understand your feelings because my mom isn’t here anymore either. What a beautiful tribute!
What a beautiful poem dedicated to your Mom. Wherever she is now, I’m sure that she is very proud of you and still watching you. You never lost her coz she is still in your heart.
We all go through challenges but it molds and strengthen us to be better. Don’t fret, you will be happy again soon. Learn from this experience. Nice tribute to your mom!
The worlds are filled with pain and regret. Please embrace the goodness about your own precious self. Mum will be forever with you, by your side, inside of you, watching over you.
You do have the power to say I Love You, Mum and release all the pain to be gone. Forever.
This is really sad.. i am also sorry to hear about your mom and here’s a virtual hug for you ♥
Have you heard of the song “Holes in the Floor of Heaven” by Steve Wariner? That’s always my comfort song whenever i misses my grandma and my dad.. you should try listening to it too.. it could help ease the burden
Sorry to hear about your mom, I can feel this poem for my other loved one that has past away few years ago. It’s still so saddening.
I am so sorry to hear about your mom! This was beautifully written and I feel for you right now!
This is a lovely poem. It’s such a great tribute to your mom.
A mother’s love is indeed the answer to all types of pains. With our mother’s love, we feel safe. I’m sorry for your loss.
You seem to be very strong though. I guess you still draw your strength from your mother.
Another poem but about mom, that’s very nice words and our mother’s love is always strong and she would love to receive kind words.
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E-hugs for you! It’s very melancholic. I’m so sorry about your mom. Stay strong!
You are strong. Thanks for sharing your emotions. I hope my e-hugs helps!
I know your mum is so proud of you! Stay strong! Some more e-hugs for you!
Aaawwwww…2 hugs for you, from me! I love this writing so much! The sun shines so bitterly on us, the motherless!
This is so beautiful piece. I miss my mom too.
This is such a beautiful poem, you are so great with words! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
What a beautiful poem ! Sorry to hear about your mom.
I love this poem, but so sorry to hear about your mom.
Sorry to hear about your loss. I lost my mom to cancer a few years back, so I know how it feels
What a lovely and poignant poem for your mom. I can totally understand your feelings because my mom isn’t here anymore either. What a beautiful tribute!
This makes me so incredibly sad, but what a lovely poem.
Anyone who has loved and lost a mum can relate. Hurrah to those who love us so much.
That’s an emotional poem, I’m sorry about your loss. As I read the words, It gets me more emotional.
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What a beautiful poem dedicated to your Mom. Wherever she is now, I’m sure that she is very proud of you and still watching you. You never lost her coz she is still in your heart.
We all go through challenges but it molds and strengthen us to be better. Don’t fret, you will be happy again soon. Learn from this experience. Nice tribute to your mom!
Your poem is so touching and beautiful. Sorry for your loss. Do take care of yourself
What a wonderful poem. The message is very expressive yet sad. So sorry about what happened.
Aww, what a touching tribute to you mother. Very sweet words that convey your love for her and your sense of loss. Sending virtual hugs!
This is so beautiful, and it hit me so hard. My mom is waiting for me, too. I think about her every day.
This was the most beautiful tribute to your mom. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Reading this makes me miss my mom. Indeed a very heartfelt poem. I am sure your mom would definitely be proud of you.
Losing a parent is so difficult. This is such an emotional poem and strikes home, I can relate.
This is such an amazing and beautifully written piece and I’m sorry about what happened.
What a beautifully written tribute to your wonderful mom. Thank you for sharing.
This is a really sincere and very heartwarming poem. It made me miss my mom.
I love you mum, I love you! Same thing, I love my dad too
I can feel your pain. My mom passed away 3 years ago
I really enjoyed this. It can be hard going through the loss of a parent. You expressed it beautifully in this poem.
I’d like to send you hugs each time I read this emotion-filled poem.
I’m so sorry about your mom. You are very strong. I’m sure your mom is so proud of you. Hugs.
I have been away with my Mom for a while, and this makes me miss her much more. Stay strong!
I am so so sorry to hear about your mom, I don’t know what to say, this is sad!!! Amazing poem, amazing!!!
What a beautiful poem. I am truly sorry for your loss.
it is so well written and filled with emotions! you write it so powerful, I feel as if I am an empath just through your words
That was an absolutely beautiful poem. I felt it deep as I also lost my mother. Thank you for your touching words.
Having recently lost my mom, I was brought to tears reading this poem.
These words are wonderful. Beautifully written.
This was an absolutely beautiful poem. I also lost my mother so I can relate to your words very much. Blessings to you ?
The worlds are filled with pain and regret. Please embrace the goodness about your own precious self. Mum will be forever with you, by your side, inside of you, watching over you.
You do have the power to say I Love You, Mum and release all the pain to be gone. Forever.
I love this line “I want to smell your love again”. I think I should write a poem based on that one.
This is such a beautiful and heartwarming poem! Those who lost their mother can relate to it. I am so sorry for your loss 🙁