Walking alone under the harsh sun

Walking alone under the harsh sun

Still doesn’t know my end. 

No one to share my untold stories  

I have a long way to go. 

Your affection was like sunlight turning difficult things into a goddess. 

When I look up at the sky 

I can see your innocent smile. 

Mum, your love is my temple; your face is my prayer.  

Mum, without you, life is so rough.  

When I close my eyes and see a striking butterfly  

Surround me in my sturdy stage and my gladdest times. 

You fly into my imaginings, and when I am slumbering 

You will always be an Angel infinite.  

Mum, still, I can feel your every fragrant breath  

and begged that each one wasn’t your ultimate. 

But the time was so cruel with me, Mum. 

I wanted you to wake up and snuggle me for the last time. 

But I lost you forever, Mum. 

Mum, now you are pain-free 

found your place in Heaven underneath a cherry blossom. 

Mum, when I close my eyes,  

I can hear your soft echoes.  

When I breathe, I sense you adore me. 

Mum, you told me not to be afraid 

You always wiped my hushed tears, 

Heal my sores, Show me right from wrong.  

Mum, can you hold me for a sec? 

I want to smell your love again. 

I wish you could see me and reward me for my achievement.  

I am here just because of you, Mum. 

You are my inspiration and motivation. 

I can’t see you anymore, but I can feel you with me always. 

Mum, I miss you so much now as I missed you then.  

Always and forever  

Mum, remember I am still waiting for you.  

My last desire If I could see you just one more time. Do you know mom what I would do? 

Release all my gloom and say, Mum, I love you so much. 


49 thoughts on “Walking alone under the harsh sun

  1. This is really sad.. i am also sorry to hear about your mom and here’s a virtual hug for you ♥
    Have you heard of the song “Holes in the Floor of Heaven” by Steve Wariner? That’s always my comfort song whenever i misses my grandma and my dad.. you should try listening to it too.. it could help ease the burden

  2. Sorry to hear about your mom, I can feel this poem for my other loved one that has past away few years ago. It’s still so saddening.

    1. A mother’s love is indeed the answer to all types of pains. With our mother’s love, we feel safe. I’m sorry for your loss.

  3. Aaawwwww…2 hugs for you, from me! I love this writing so much! The sun shines so bitterly on us, the motherless!

  4. What a lovely and poignant poem for your mom. I can totally understand your feelings because my mom isn’t here anymore either. What a beautiful tribute!

  5. That’s an emotional poem, I’m sorry about your loss. As I read the words, It gets me more emotional.

  6. What a beautiful poem dedicated to your Mom. Wherever she is now, I’m sure that she is very proud of you and still watching you. You never lost her coz she is still in your heart.

  7. We all go through challenges but it molds and strengthen us to be better. Don’t fret, you will be happy again soon. Learn from this experience. Nice tribute to your mom!

  8. Aww, what a touching tribute to you mother. Very sweet words that convey your love for her and your sense of loss. Sending virtual hugs!

  9. Reading this makes me miss my mom. Indeed a very heartfelt poem. I am sure your mom would definitely be proud of you.

  10. I really enjoyed this. It can be hard going through the loss of a parent. You expressed it beautifully in this poem.

  11. it is so well written and filled with emotions! you write it so powerful, I feel as if I am an empath just through your words

  12. That was an absolutely beautiful poem. I felt it deep as I also lost my mother. Thank you for your touching words.

  13. This was an absolutely beautiful poem. I also lost my mother so I can relate to your words very much. Blessings to you 🙏

  14. The worlds are filled with pain and regret. Please embrace the goodness about your own precious self. Mum will be forever with you, by your side, inside of you, watching over you.
    You do have the power to say I Love You, Mum and release all the pain to be gone. Forever.

  15. This is such a beautiful and heartwarming poem! Those who lost their mother can relate to it. I am so sorry for your loss 🙁

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