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My silent tears tied with your eyes

My silent tears tied with your eyes

My silent tears tied with your eyes

 On the paradise of love
on the coasts of sadness
glossy textiles darken
and what is blurry becomes perky.
A true beloved
Has held tenure of my core,
And his grasp has occupied the lakes of my eyes
With splashes of blue liquid.
Don’t ask about the blue sky.
On the parting, they grieved.
This complete body of mine has pierced.
And the blisters have touched my soul.
How will you know?
What I have gone through in indefinite love,
How many cracks have I swallowed?
And how many stings I have amassed.
In the rough land of desires
And on griefs couch,
The body is still glowing
But it’s dark inside the core.
I am a worshipper
Verses confound me,
But wherein I consist
The shrines have locks on their entrances.
It’s so strange whether I am or not
Kind of torment is controlling my core
At parting time, those eyes had my verses
Verses that I had never shared with anyone.
My silent tears tied with your eyes.
and I can’t close it anymore.
There is such a grim level of my love
Because there is no end.
The heart is like a shore of agony
sadness has fallen like a calamity
No one is like dawn in my dusk.
My life always switched
between sunshine and shade,
but never split.

My silent tears tied with your eyes

By Magazineup

58 Comments

  • This poem is really beautiful, I can feel the pain in this piece. THanks for sharing!

  • Stunning poem, I love the tragic and suffering imagery of love. My favorite verse was:”How many cracks have I swallowed?” Awesome work.

  • Such a beautiful poem. So deep, and I can feel the pain while reading this.
    Amazing!

  • I can feel your pain and the metaphors are amazing. You should think about composing this.

  • You are really good at writing poems and giving the words feelings. You can feel the pain and sadness when reading your creation.

  • Mosaics Gift Guide -

    This is so so good!!! You can almost touch the pain, feel it for sure…wow…Amazing…

  • Thena Franssen -

    Thank you for writing these words. I can tell that they can from a place in your heart that is vulnerable yet wanting to share with others.

  • This is an excellent piece of glittering sorrow, where the tears are dazzling with your beautiful crafting of words. You poem truly is an art. I always feel goosebumps reading your poems. It reaches to the core.

  • Sarah Bailey -

    What a powerful poem, you really have an incredible way with words. Thank you so much for sharing them.

  • Indeed, Life is between sunshine and shade. it makes you love, cry, smile, and laugh

  • This poem brings out strong emotions from me. Words do carry power. And great work here. Keep it up

  • As Karen White said, in her book “A life without rain is like the sun without shade.”

  • “How many cracks have I swallowed”

    That’s one of the toughest lines I’ve read in a poem in several years. I certainly felt the anguish in it.

  • What a beautiful poem..your words brought me to tears! Thank you for sharing with us…will be sharing as well!

  • Elizabeth Williams -

    A really powerful poem, beautifully written. I love the lines “the body is still glowing, but it’s dark inside the core”. Thank you for sharing.

  • Jupiter Hadley -

    What a lovely and personal poem. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I hope that your tears do dry and subside.

  • Rose Ann Sales -

    Wow that was such a really amazing and beautiful Poem thank you so much for sharing this to us I really love it!

  • Sarah Stockley -

    Myself and my daughter love poetry. I will show this to her as she is studying lots of poems for her GCSEs at the moment. It is beautiful.

  • Ntensibe Edgar -

    Wow….I love how you have balanced the affection existing in the dusk here, with how we see it at dawn or in the dawn! A very beautiful poem, it is.

  • This type of angst is something most of us have felt. The shade drawn but not broken, and then we emerge stronger.

  • Dude! Loved this poetry. So so good. You have showcased the feeling within this poem really well. Thanks for sharing!

  • Lovely and enchanting poem. It’s captivating, deep and thought-provoking. Well done.

  • Yeah Lifestyle -

    These poetic words are so full of meaning and so beautifully written, you are so talented

  • MELANIE EDJOURIAN -

    This is such a beautifully written poem. It has been well written and is full of emotion.

  • Wow such a deep poem. You’re a gifted writer for sure! I think we’ve all felt that way at one time or another (just not sure we could all express it like that!)

  • Wow such a deep poem. You’re a gifted writer for sure! I think we’ve all felt that way at one time or another (just not sure we could all express it like that!) 🙂

  • Heather Klein Wolf -

    This is such a moving poem. The words are beautiful yet convey grief and suffering at the same time.

  • I can feel every word in this poem. It makes my heart ache. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.

  • I find myself wondering what life has been like. There is much angst in this poem but you had a beautiful expression.

  • I find myself wondering what life has been like. There is much angst in this poem but you had a beautiful expression. Well done

  • Everything Enchanting -

    This is such a beautiful poem. I can feel the pain and sadness! Keep up the great work 🙂

  • I absolutely love all of your poems and pieces. This one is so moving, I could see it being turned into a song with a guitar. Lovely.

  • WOW. I can feel those words and you have written it so nicely. Keep up the great work

  • This is such a beautiful yet heart tugging poem. I love the imagery you used here. Very deep.

  • Your use of metaphors is amazing! I love the expression “lakes of my eyes” in that context, it’s so deep.

  • Anosa Malanga -

    I admire people who are talented enough to create poems like this. You can really feel the pain in the words while reading this.

  • This is deep and emotional. I felt it while reading. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

  • There is no black and white. There are only shades of gray. This is important to remember when we evaluate things in life

  • Talya Stone -

    Such a beautiful poem – such raw emotion captured within. You have an incredible way with words.

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