I made a story with a splash of tears. And this story is just for you to remind my affection. I am trying to run from this crowd, But still, I sealed myself with your unwanted shackle. My imagination is killing me tenderly day by day And my hope just became ash I scatter this ash in the sea. The rhythm of my wave is throbbing fast, And It is hard to texture my sensation of melancholy. I made a story with this rhythm of my heart, And it is floating with your glee, When you are alone, you will sense my love in your beat, Yes, this is my heartbeat which is sitting in your core. I am not in your domain now But my breath is fluttering in your breath. The aroma of my love is embracing you tight, Because I can’t escape from the cage of love. I made this story in agony. My core is still bleeding, And my hope is drowning now. I hide from the soar of sadness, But still, it is chasing me. I put the strings under the ground, But the sea waves came and opened everything. Yes, I made this story with a splash of sadness, And this story is just for you to remind me of forever. My love is just a canvas of imagination It is captive there with a colour of sadness. And I will keep this canvas of love till my last breath. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By Rinrainbow
This was such a beautiful poem. I can feel the sadness, but it’s also just beautiful.
The longing and sadness in this post are so powerful and so touching. I really love this one.
I can really feel the longing for your lost love in this poem. You really evoke the emotion well with your words.
This is a work of heart and you have a way with words. Beautifully written!
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This is beautifully written, I enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing this!
Wow, the sadness in this poem. It’s written well and makes you feel.
Such a story. Thanks for sharing
What a beautiful poem, so full of emotion and sadness, so well written
You have put these words together and created a beautiful, heartfelt poem that evokes intense emotions. Great job.
That is a great and touching poem, thanks for the share!
Nnniiiccceeeeee…I like how this poem has brought out some sad and sweet feelings in me. It reminded me of someone I know.
The pain and longing is so evident in your words. What a beautifully crafted poem.
OH wow this is so beautifully sad.
There is beauty in sadness. What a beautiful poem..thank you for sharing with us.
I love a good poem. My daughter loves to write poetry, she will love this one.
Oh wow, what a moving poem! Very emotional.
This is such a powerful poem that has touched my heart. It is beautifully written and is full of raw emotion. Thank you for sharing.
This is so beautifully written. I could feel your emotions through your words. You know they come from your heart.
I’m not sure if this is happening to you right now, but believe me, this will pass. The pain of a lost love may linger but it will no longer be as painful.
I love a good poem, but this one right here. I feel it. It’s incredible how poems can capture someone’s heart.
This is so so beautiful wow! You write beautifully. I am not your domain now….I loooove it. Thank you for sharing.
What a beautiful and emotional poem. Thank you for sharing.
Such a beautiful poem, I love how you have played with words to make the readers feel the different emotions
Bravo my friend!! Such a lovely poem! So creative:)
very emotional and well written, thanks for creating this and I think a lot of readers will resonate from the beautiful words.
Wow! This is such a really
Wow! This is such a really beautiful and wonderful poem! I really love this! Thanks for sharing this with us!
This is so beautiful! I can really feel the emotion. Gorgeous!
Such an intense piece, and definitely full of emotion. I can feel the pain through the writing.
So beautiful! Your writing is amazing. I love this.
This is a pretty poem and the words and how it’s written are amazing. Thank you for sharing!
This is a nice poem! I really love the meaning!
Nicely structured and written. Quite liked this line “I am not in your domain but my breath is fluttering in your breath”. Quite liked the corresponding picture as well.