If I could compose a story, It would be best at any point told. I'd compose on my Daddy, For he had a heart of gold. You're my hero And my base My life would be forever changed If you weren't here. I'll never fully understand, Why your time here was so little, But, you said you'll always be there. To get me when I fall. I've cried a million tears. And afterward, a million more. My heart is solely so broken. My soul is on the ground. Tears that I weep and appeals Will ideally travel so far To touch at my loving Daddy Sitting among the stars. There have been thousands of times. When I've wished you were still here, To rejoice all of my bliss's, And help me calm my fear. I'll remember that walk I took with my Daddy and always wish it could have been longer. But Still, i wish, Just one more step or one last walk. Dad I miss you and need you badly, I know I have to let you go. So you could rest in peace Wishing I could hold your hand to scream your name out loud. You're no longer here, Dad, but I hope I make you proud. May you know how much I love you, though I'm here and you are there. I'm happy that, you're my Dad in my earth, you're a vivid magnificent star. By rinrainbow ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh, man, this hit me right in the feels. I need to call my dad today. This is beautiful.
What a beautiful poem is so touching and has so much feeling in it
I’m so sorry for your loss. I recently lost my father and it was horrible. This got me in my feels. thank you for sharing.
Sorry about your loss. My dad’s birthday was just three days ago. He just turned 82- I need to give him another ring, just to chat about whatever.
I am so sorry for your loss!
Lost my father just about a year ago, so I feel you…
Sorry for your loss. I lost my father in October to dementia and it hurts. I feel your pain.
So touched by this. Thanks for sharing this poem.
Trust me or not I am shaking after read your poem. Beautifully blended with emotion.
Aww sweetheart you are an amazing writer. Such a touching poem. God bless.
It’s really sad to lose someone in your family. So sorry for your loss.
I loss my dad. I know ho to feel this poem. This is sometimes making me sad every time rembering his profile on my mind.
This is such a touching, bittersweet poem. Loss is so hard, especially when it’s the loss of a parent. You never really get over it. You just live with it.
This is a beautiful and very touching poem. I know your Dad will love it, I am sure that he misses you, I am sure he’s proud of you for you being tough every single day without him. Keep safe and may God bless you.
Wonderful poem. Brough me to tears, as I’ve recently lost my mother. I know the feeling…
This poem made me so emotional, love it!!! Thank you so much for sharing, so much…
Such an emotional poem full of feelings and love. I can feel your respect and love for your father. Your father is there with you, blessing you every moment.
This is a very beautifully written poem, so sorry for your loss.
Oh wow, this is so heartfelt. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.
Although I haven’t lost either of my parents, I still feel this deeply. I lost my best friend when I was 14. He was practically my brother. It hit me so hard.
I can’t imagine losing either of my parents. I know it’s coming, but I’m not ready at all. I think this is a wonderful but sad reminder to cherish the time we have.
This touched my heart so deeply. I’ve always been very close with my dad, and I cannot imagine the world without him, even though I know that will come eventually.
I’m so sorry for your loss. This is such a beautiful and touching tribute to your dad – thank you for sharing this poem.
I’m sorry about the loss of your father. I lost both of my parents and can relate to this.
These lines, your words are very much touching. I miss my dad, I miss my parents too!
My heart just stopped so beautiful poem..Covid took my dad last week so i can related with your pain.
What a beautiful poem. I don’t know what I would do if my dad wasn’t around.
So sorry for your loss! However, those are the moments for beautiful poetry…
Normally i dont leave a comment but i can not stop myself. Mind blowing i can feel your pain. God bless you.
I’m so sorry for your loss. This was so heartbreaking to read.
What a beautiful palm and what a incredible way to remember your dad. This poem really struck in emotional chord with me
I’m sorry for your loss. I love the poem fully of emotions.
that is such a lovely and touching poem. I am so sorry for your loss
Such a beautiful and powerful poem. I am sorry for your loss and wish you well.
What a beautifully written poem and I am truly sorry for your loss. I enjoyed and wish you the best 🙂
I am so sorry for your loss! This is such a beautiful and touching poem, it just made me emotional ?
This hits me so hard. My dad passed in 1999 and it still hasn’t gotten easier.
I can feel you. This is such an emotional blog post. I hope you’ll feel better soon.
First of all, I am so sorry for your loss. I also missed my dad. This poem really hit me and remind me of him. Specially in difficult time.
I don’t have a dad, he left us when we were young. My grandfather became my dad since then I can’t imagine my life without my grandfather. He is my superhero, and the sad thing is I wasn’t able to tell him how much I love him.
Awww. I feel your pain and I am sorry for your loss. It is good that you are were able to express it in this beautiful poem. I am sure your dad loves this.
Such a beautiful tribute to a father. I know so many that have lost their father recently, they would love this.
I’m so sorry for your loss, such a beautiful poem
You are lucky to have a father that is so worthy of your love. He must be a good father for you to miss him like this.
beautiful song – I feel your pain as I too lost my dad and miss him so much.
a such a sweet poem, so very talented and so touching. I am so sorry your father is no longer with you
Such a beautiful poem. I can relate to how you’re feeling because I lost my dad 12 years ago and it still hurts deeply and I still miss him so much. I can tell you’re making your dad really proud! Keep shining 🙂
I love my father, too. Too bad, he’s no longer with us. The poem is moving.
Your poem is beautifully written and it got me deeply connected. I also lost my Dad 10 years ago, and I still remember many good times with him as a kid.
Very touching and sweet, and thanks a lot for sharing your own feelings, and you wrote beautifully. – Knycx Journeying
It sounds like you loved your dad very much. It is wonderful that you had such a close relationship. I never knew my dad or had a fatherly figure in my life but I love reading about and knowing people that had an amazing relationship with their father.
That is a beautiful piece you wrote for your daddy,it is so heart touching’you got me missing my dad!
Just mind blowing no word to say.I was looking for writers name for all masterpieces work.But no author name.you deserve big salute from me.
I’m sorry for your loss. It is a very touching poem. Your dad will live in your memories and stories.