Stories of my feelings for you have all been illustrious, Look at how they are all linked to your name, Perhaps it is my generosity that I am silent till now, Even though I know all of your failings. People who don't burn from inside, They are like dead vessels, The only thing being cold are the bodies. Burn this world to the ground with my silent words, When my destiny is to cease to exist eventually. Then where's the harm in flaring up before turning to ashes. And those ashes become of my strength. Expectation touching hope should never end, The cherished should never be slandered, but I scorched down with the lamps, Your arrival was only a dream. People kept on tossing me like a chunk of earth out of their way , onto that mistreated path that happened to be mine. And so, I kept wandering along my way. I amassed myself into the whole thing and flung myself into the motionlessness. This was my crashed silence - prevalent and spacious, Deep within the stillness, I can hear only the sound of my footsteps. And my happiness was hiding in the last mysterious silent tear. My memories take a roller coaster's drive. And daily, I live another life. My eyes become teary. And my heart is clouded by a fog of unknown imagination, I looked around but found only numbness. No one can see my eyes because of dust. I feel like I am sinking and push my dream with a silent wave. Stories of my feelings for you are still silent and unknown. And my love is a splash of tears. Finally, I reached the last path And My heart turns gray with ash, The river may carry ashes away, or dust will hide them again. It's time to fall. BY rinrainbow
Wow your poem aches my heart and hit me hard very deep and meaningful I love it!
Such profound words from you again. I can feel the layers of emotion in each line.
Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful gift for writing.
I love reading your poem over and over again. I couldn’t seem to get tired of how beautiful it is.
Stunning and moving poetry, The references of dust and ash really paint such dark energy, so deep!
Awesome words, I feel like there are more mystery meanings behind these words.
Such strong emotions in this piece. Very powerful.
Have you read or listened to a poem so good that you don’t want it to end? This is such a poem! I don’t have a favourite line in it!
That was adorable and touching at the same time. Not everyone can express their emotions with words and poetry and admire your skills. I, myself used to write poems but i only find the inspiration whenever i’m feeling emotionally overwhelmed. Thank you for sharing this
This is a very deep poem and touches my soul. Your a lovely writer.
I felt this deep in my core… there’s something about it that really spoke to me and how I feel about a certain someone.
I can tell that there is a lot of deep emotions behind these words. Thank you for sharing with us.
I have mixed feelings about this piece. It’s so strong and emotional at the same time there’s joy after reading it. Such a masterpiece!
This poem is definitely getting a buzz! Can’t wait to read your other poems soon. I’m looking forward!
Well, some good things never last. I have so much sympathy for this person. I hope she will find her true in the afterlife.
I pains me to know that there are persons with unrequited love. I hope people in this situation will find the courage to look for someone meant for them.
I always believe that there is one person meant to us. Just be patient.
Beautiful! I look forward to reading more of your writing!
Another great and moving poem from you! I really enjoy reading your poetry!
This is a beautiful poem. There is so much emotion in the words.
What a deep and touching text. You are very talented and have a way with words 🙂
It’s so painful. I can’t imagine the deeply pain. The poem really brings the true feelings of being hurt.The arrangement is quite impressive.❤️
It’s written so well. It really tugs on the heartstrings.
The rhythm of your lines and spaces is great, it touched my soul.
Oh wow.. My tears almost fell reading this poem. It’s so full of emotions.
Wow, this poem is so strong. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us.
Another great poem here! Poems are great way to express our feelings and emotions. This is such a masterpiece
So many emotions in every line. I can feel it while reading this. I hope I can express mine just like how you do in this poem.
Your poem is very emotional. I have to read it silently, then read it out loud to see the difference and oh boy, it is very meaningful.
Why do we fall in love and get hurt in the end? That’s the question that we should look for an answer.
Beautiful and so deep poem. I can feel so much emotion in every word. I love it!
I feel the emotion in your words. You really can convey a lot of feeling in each line!
What a beautifully written poem and love the meaning it conveys. Keep up the amazing work <3
Que deep!!!! Me encanta. I read your poem aloud and really felt the feelings you put into each word. Breathe easy and take care of yourself, beautiful, emotional being.
So touching…I can feel your emotions…Thanks for sharing…Keep writing ✍️
Great post with wonderful words that delivers a strong message. Thanks for sharing this article.
Thank you for sharing a piece of your soul with us. The words are beautifully written you are an amazing talent.
You picked the perfect title here: My love is a splash of tears. Keep up the good work
such heavy words.. but loved how you use your word.. more please!
Wow! What an incredible poem with such profound feelings.
Wow! Such raw and deep emotions in this poem.