My love is for you is my ultimate secret
My love is for you..
The morning I wake up, I feel restless
Disturbed with the thought
that I am too obvious.
My Heart that rhythms for you
In more ways than one. It's devastating,
flouting, leaving me crying.
This emotion in my heart
I have to keep it
My love for you is my ultimate secret.
Beating this feeling is my greatest inanity
It doesn’t bring me peace and serenity,
But I d rather conceals
it thanks to fear of rejection,
I'll save myself from extreme misery.
Darkness surrounds me with every step I take.
Wounds break open as soon as they seal.
I've lost enough,
Had gained nothing
That dignity is fallacious.
It has never been shaped
My peace is now quiet,
Making not a single noise
My dreams stand saturated,
I am losing my composure
Where do I exist?
Clueless, my presence is trembling.
Confusion feeds like a savage inside a mine,
Leaving nothing reflected worthy remains
Intend to walk through life less ordinary
Isolate, exiled, different and disdained.
BY Rinrainbow
Very moving yet very deep prose. Thank you for sharing. You definitely inspired me to write more creative writing on my blog.
This is why I always find it very important to make sure you come right out and tell people how you feel!
Such a great piece. I can relate and connect to your words in a major way. Sharing this!
Oh my, you are such a talent! Have you already thought about publishing your creations in the form of a kindle ebook or something similar?
This hits even the bottom of my heart. I really felt what you wrote here. Looking forward reading more like this from you.
This poem is so beautiful and moving. Thank you for sharing x
I could almost feel the hurt just by reading this poem. If I could give my unsolicited advice, just walk up to the person and tell her/him how you feel. Who knows that person might have the same feeling as yours.
What a beautiful poem, so emotional and touching. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
What a beautiful poem!
You are a talented writer. Love your prose.
What a lovely poem, thank you for sharing. your writing is always so good.
What an amazing poem… You can really feel the hurt!
This is so beautiful! Love it! I can definitely related to your words in a big way, so good and always a joy to read your lines.
Very lovely poem. How long did it take you to write it?
Very touching prose, thanks for sharing
These are such great words,every sentence is just so touching,looking forward for your next post.
You are such a talented writer.. I love everything that is written in here,so touching.
This is such a lovely poem. You are so talented!
Beautiful poem. Very moving and deep. Waiting to read more.
After reading this beautiful lines I became your biggest fan of your writing skills.
I never realized that I was already finished reading your post. So nice. Thanks for sharing.
This is very moving! You have a beautiful way with words ?
If this is your story, my advice would be to not let the fear of rejection hold you back from saying how you feel. At least if you are rejected, you can move forward. If you are accepted, then good on you.
Another beautiful love poem that is lyrical and touching. I hope the recipient appreciates it.
Very moving and beautiful piece of poetry. You really got the message and emotion across in your words.
You have talent to describe how you feeling in beautiful poem. Great for you!
Sad but beautiful. I can felt how your feeling when wrote this poem.
I was deeply moved by this poem. It was lovely yet so melancholic. I can feel each lines.