The emptiness in my eyes secret
The emptiness in my eyes
How could I be so misplaced
In a place I know so well?
Clouds of roar, pouring rain,
The hurt I feel, the throbbing pain.
Saying I’m fine when I’m anything but.
This ache always hits my soul and rips at my gut.
Emotional soreness walks with me through the day,
and sleeps with me through the night,
leaving me depleted with no strength to fight.
Escape, I want to dig myself out,
filled with misery, filled with hesitation.
The dark beneath my skin,
The emptiness in my eyes,
The blood in my sweat,
And my cold breath.
I wish that I could show you
How it hurts to breathe or move
But I know that it’s not possible
So this I cannot prove.
The touch of skin or textile
I want to scream out loud
But I know I won’t do so
Cause the sound drowns in the crowd.
The pain’s almost intolerable
Like a thousand stabbing knives.
I’m scared to think
Because I don’t want to fade away,
The truth is I’m afraid,
But what is there to fear?
This is everything I’ve wanted.
So, then why am I in tears?
Mute not able to express,
this gnawing pain and feeling of relentless distress.
I wish that curse would fade,
I want that rain could drown my feelings.
searching for the Cure
A Mystery Piece A Day
Tomorrow We May Find It
Then I will be gone.
Written By Rinrainbow
Very deep. I could feel the pain through your words. May I ask—what inspired you to create this?
This is a very nice poem that transmits a lot of emotion. Congratulations for writing it.
Your pain is tangible through the depth of your words. Thank you for sharing you vulnerability. I do hope that you have found light in the darkness, a hand to hold, and a mind to listen as you navigate this dark time.
this is so deep girl, thank you for sharing this, You are so brave and strong.
Very beautiful poem, full of emotion. Thanks so much for sharing your work.
This made me shed a tear. I can totally relate to this!
for so long, only now that i have read another poem. i miss writing one. anyway, yours made me cry for readings i cant truly comprehend.
I love your poem. Poems need passion and creativity for its writer and I think you got both.
How well you have gotten raw emotion into your words.
What a profound sad tho, dark poem. Makes me want to cry and crawl in to hug the personae at the same time.
This was very beautifully written. I could really feel the emotion and pain in the words. I look forward to reading more entries. Thanks for sharing!
Such a beautiful poem. SO deep. Sometimes, it hurts to even breathe and you have described it so beautifully in words!
This was absolutely beautiful wow!